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Teen Poetry #8

I'm for no one...

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-10-09 07:50 AM

I feel a sturr in the wind,
There's something wrong.
I can't shake this feeling.
This feeling is so strong.

But I feel something worst is to come.
Does he really see me?
Am I just a person come to know?
Does he really see?

Why is depressions hand
laying on me?
Am I too bleak?
I think its not meant to be.

I see him walking everyday..
Glorious as he be.
But I'm stuck in the shadow's knowing the truth.
That there's no attraction for me.

Will we end up together?
After all the rain clears?
Or will I be wrong..
That is my fear.

The truth is realized now.
Our love is not to grow.
That it was never meant to become
Because I'm only a person come to know.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-10-09 10:33 AM

"I see him walking everyday..
Glorious as he be.
But I'm stuck in the shadow's knowing the truth.
That there's no attraction for me."

Awwww! sad but Great poem! You know you can always email me, too. If you can help me than maybe I can help you or at least let you know that I'm here to listen to anything you have to say. I know it can be harder for us.

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-10-09 08:16 PM

zach, you've out done yourself. this, to me, is one of your best poems yet. i love it. great job by far...library!!!!!

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-10-09 11:40 PM

You Can get through it Zach, I know you can. I'm here when you need me, And we're all pulling for you.

Just so you know your wordsmithing is amazing.

OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!!

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