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Teen Poetry #8

MY PAIN

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

0 posted 2008-10-10 11:53 PM

" My Pain"

Here I stand again
watching you from afar
as i slowly wonder then
will this pain leave a scar?
The more i try to get closer
the more it hurts me inside
and i'm finding myself weaker
with these feelings that i try to hide
I don't know if you're acting cold
though i feel that you already know
emotions that slowly unfolds
wishing for your feelings to show.

But if this will go on more longer
i think it's better for me to be away
it's hurting me deeply inside
and i'd rather not stay
maybe with this, you will see
you might soon realize it along the way
to look back and notice someone like me
once so near yet now so far away.

~~*K. B.*~~

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-10-11 03:29 PM

WOW!!! I loved it!!! Great poem, good job!

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-10-11 08:17 PM

Christine is totally right there! I agree! this is sooo relate able and amazing! Great work!

-Zach

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

3 posted 2008-10-13 04:15 AM

thanks for the comments everyone... :-)

~~*K. B.*~~

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