Teen Poetry #8 |
Patch the Failing Seams |
Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Patch the Failing Seams What do I do? When I see no relief Nothing to say In this time so brief I’ll cry for you darling What can I say? Deep pools of hurt I can’t simply wish away Know now the metaphor More true than it seems I’ll cry for you darling Wish to patch the failing seams What do I say? To dry the tearing eyes Nothing to do To stop time as it flies Let the salt tears Fall on my dry parched ground Run after the shadow Run like the sentless hound Know now the metaphor More true than it seems I’ll cry for you darling Wish to patch the failing seams Could never sever The ties that bind Could never change The strong and the kind Don’t raise the cross Nor the burning stake Can’t stop the pain Nor my friend forsake Know now the metaphor More true than it seems I’ll cry for you darling Wish to patch the failing seams OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!! |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Wow!!! I loved it, so wonderful! Live in the present but don't forget the future |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
aww frank, i am powerless to say anything. "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Frank this is simple outstanding. I can't find the words how great this poem is... Bravo! -Zach "I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!" |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Thanks so much you guys. OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!! |
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