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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 2008-10-02 10:20 PM


How did you hold me tight
When you know who I am
How could I think it was right
I didn't understand

How did you take me back
When I've done what I did
How couldn't I see what this lacks
I guess the truth hid

How couldn't you see what I would do
Like I've done many times before
How could I let myself hurt you
I'm sure you can't take it anymore

How could you say those words
You said the other night
How couldn't I know it hurts
when I saw the pain you fight

How could you stand to see me
After all I've done
How could I be so mean
I guess it's time for me to run

Live in the present but don't forget the future

[This message has been edited by freeand2sexy (10-02-2008 11:16 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-10-03 08:02 AM


Aww.. Sad but great poem... Keep up the writing!

-Zach

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

prettypinkrebel
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2 posted 2008-10-03 09:20 AM


good poem i like it. and i kno  u dnt kno me but im here
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