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ShawtySheFly
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since 2007-12-19
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In his Elevator (LOL)

0 posted 2008-10-03 11:44 AM


I’m blue cuz I’m missing the sunshine
It only rains here
Not even a rainbow
Those clouds and all the tears they can’t hold back
They make my days all blue and black
Waitin for it to be all normal again
I’m missin out on da sunshine day after day
But its only cuz by itself it went away
It wasn’t pushed or forced to be gone
One day it just decided to wake up and move on
Like they all do
Leaving me here….not even w/ a clue
All the light I ever get is from the occasional falling stars
How far?
How far has the sun went?
Outta my grasp
How far is the sunshine?
Waitin for it to be all normal again
I’m missin out on the sunshine day after day
But its only cuz by itself it went away
It wasn’t pushed or forced to be gone
One day it just decided to wake up and move on
When it comes back….wake me up
And maybe I’ll move on too
Get away from what used to be
All of this so called “normality”
My days all blue and black
Those clouds and all the tears they can’t hold back
Not even a rainbow
And it only rains here
I’m missin da sunshine

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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2008-10-03 07:14 PM


"I’m missin out on the sunshine day after day
But its only cuz by itself it went away
It wasn’t pushed or forced to be gone
One day it just decided to wake up and move on"

This was my favorite part. I think it was really good!

Live in the present but don't forget the future

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