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Angel, Your Falling
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Angel, Your Falling |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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oh angel your falling and theirs no net to be found theirs just a silent echo of this falling down and though try as i might i wont reach you in time the damage is done and we're losing the fight we're turning to ashes as our life burns away we can do this together and hope as we pray. oh angel your falling and theirs no net to be found theirs just a silent echo of this falling down |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Very well done Bryan.. This poem was just simple and clean..  -Zach "Only in darkness can we see the stars. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Wonderful! Don't believe Everything you Think |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Beautiful. Truely beautiful. Simple, but sweet. |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
great... enjoyed it. ~~*K. B.*~~ |
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