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yvetters_24
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since 2006-08-27
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0 posted 2008-09-25 11:01 PM





Now i lay me down to sleep
Your discuzting secrets I shall keep
And tonight I will die before you wake
My soul was never really mine to take
May evil eyes watch you through the night
And when you wake to the pale moonlight
May you find I have given up on this misurable life


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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2008-09-26 08:45 PM


I like it, i can kinda picture it in my head!

Live in the present but don't forget the future

BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07
Posts 126
Philippines
2 posted 2008-09-29 03:42 AM


short but i think it's a great one to read... strong emotions do show...

~~*K. B.*~~

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