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Who do you think you are
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Who do you think you are |
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ShawtySheFly Member
since 2007-12-19
Posts 71In his Elevator (LOL) |
what do i call you cuz you make me cry heartbreaker, heart taker, that needle in my eye the knife in my heart cuz you stabbed me there the blood in my vains, you stopped the flow my body is trembling and i'm freezing cold you are cold, your heart is cold i hate you, hate you eye-pleaser, mind teaser, that kissing disiese so you think you're a pimp ...shiit boy please what do i call you who do you think you are cuz you make me cry i just wish you would die but i would probably continue to cry Angel.Baby>>>Nae<<< |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Wow, i really liked it and it flowed nicely! Live in the present but don't forget the future |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
 Good luck. If you need to talk... As for the poem I thought the flow could have been better but that's probably just me. Don't believe Everything you Think |
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