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Teen Poetry #8

Is This Real

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-09-16 12:53 PM

is there someone
out there in the cold
i can hear your heart
beating close

reach my hand
to know you feel
exhale to prove your real

its raining out
and freezing cold
im sick of haveing
to be alone

now breath in
and breath out
hows it feel
to drown in your doubt

tell me
whats this about
why are we here
and is this real

[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (09-17-2008 06:47 PM).]

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-09-16 07:20 PM

WOW! its awesome, really really good

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-09-17 03:31 AM

Amazing.. Speechless as per usual

Octave
Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

3 posted 2008-09-17 12:31 PM

Phenomanal.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-09-18 11:29 PM

WOW! Amazing!

Don't believe Everything you Think

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

5 posted 2008-09-23 04:06 AM

great i'd say... :-)

~~*K. B.*~~

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