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fox16
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since 2008-09-18
Posts 5
US of A

0 posted 2008-09-18 11:46 PM



I had a dream

That there was no life

Could it be all the strife

My heart is breaking

I feel it now

It is breaking

I cannot allow

Now its over

Like time on a clock

I cant believe this all

Its a shock.

© Copyright 2008 Trent Horney - All Rights Reserved
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2008-09-19 03:11 PM


good poem

Live in the present but don't forget the future

BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07
Posts 126
Philippines
2 posted 2008-09-23 04:02 AM


nice work...hope to read more from you

~~*K. B.*~~

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