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Teen Poetry #8

Just one moment

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2008-09-14 10:26 PM

There was a moment
That i thought
Everything would work out
The way i wanted it to be

Just one moment
That made me believe
Just one moment
That fooled me

There was a moment
That i couldnt see
Blind cause of love
That wasn't meant for me

Just one moment
When he looked
Just one moment
That i mistook

There was a moment
That i couldnt tell
If i screwed up
or if it all went well

Just one moment
To feel ashamed
Just one moment
Where everything changed

There was a moment
When i knew
That all i could do
Was move on, too

Just one moment

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

1 posted 2008-09-15 12:50 PM

That was so.. Wow. Its every thing, and yet nothing all at the same time it makes you think and yet you dont want to, Its just a really wonderful poem.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

Sara Mikael
Junior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 34

2 posted 2008-09-15 03:35 PM

I really loved it ....and it is so great

THE PAIN OF LOVE

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

3 posted 2008-09-15 07:51 PM

Thanks for your opinions

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