Teen Poetry #8 |
my first love |
Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
I think this poem tells you everything ,so I do not need to tell you why I wrote it and please do not say anything about my poem that it could hurt me because I am already hurt,and I know that my poems are shabby but they really help me to through my pain my first love What can I do... If I used to love you What can I do If you took my heart with you And when I told you to give my heart back It was broken.....ah so sad Why I have to pay for everything you say And for giving me a broken way You were my first love And I think it will be the last I did not know from the beginning that it would not last You taught me how to love And now you taught me how to hate What a painful fate.........!!! You killed my soul So cut that and leave me alone Because I do not need you anymore You broke my heart so badly And this relationship ended so sadly I gave you a virgin heart And you gave me yours And this relationship for my heart was the first trip A trip which had alot of treacherous Because your heart was fulled of stupid relationships What can I do .... If you took this heart with you... What can I do if i used to love you .. JUST TELL ME WHY?????? Why I have to pay for everything you say and for giving me a broken way THE PAIN OF LOVE |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
*Hug* Hey its okay. Love does hurt, but your going to be okay. They were not worth it if they hurt you so bad. Just wait and let your heart heal, for it will. And soon you will find you are someone's reason for life. But rember how much what they did to you hurt, and rember the signs, it will help you along the way. But dont worry, you will be okay. The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Oh i almost forgot, your poems are amazingly wonderful, you said everything that was on my mind and heart. The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
THANKS Abbeon you made me feel better THE PAIN OF LOVE |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
it was wonderful and i just luv your poems |
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