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Sara Mikael
Junior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 34

0 posted 2008-09-15 03:07 PM

I think this poem tells you everything ,so I do not need to tell you why I wrote it and please do not say anything about my poem that it could hurt me because I am already hurt,and I know that my poems are shabby but they really help me to through my pain

my first love

What can I do...

If I used to love you

What can I do

If you took my heart with you

And when I told you to give my heart back

It was broken.....ah so sad

Why I have to pay for everything you say

And for giving me a broken way

You were my first love

And I think it will be the last

I did not know from the beginning that it would not last

You taught me how to love

And now you taught me how to hate

What a painful fate.........!!!

You killed my soul

So cut that and leave me alone

Because I do not need you anymore

You broke my heart so badly

And this relationship ended so sadly

I gave you a virgin heart

And you gave me yours

And this relationship for my heart was the first trip

A trip which had alot of treacherous

Because your heart was fulled of stupid relationships

What can I do ....

If you took this heart with you...

What can I do if i used to love you ..

JUST TELL ME WHY??????

Why I have to pay for everything you say and for giving me a broken way

THE PAIN OF LOVE

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

1 posted 2008-09-15 03:55 PM

*Hug* Hey its okay. Love does hurt, but your going to be okay. They were not worth it if they hurt you so bad. Just wait and let your heart heal, for it will. And soon you will find you are someone's reason for life. But rember how much what they did to you hurt, and rember the signs, it will help you along the way. But dont worry, you will be okay.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

2 posted 2008-09-15 03:57 PM

Oh i almost forgot, your poems are amazingly wonderful, you said everything that was on my mind and heart.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

Sara Mikael
Junior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 34

3 posted 2008-09-15 04:01 PM

THANKS Abbeon you made me feel better
THE PAIN OF LOVE

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

4 posted 2008-09-15 07:48 PM

it was wonderful and i just luv your poems

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