Teen Poetry #8 |
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Forever trapped in you |
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XoDenisseoX Junior Member
since 2008-08-09
Posts 14 |
King of mixed signal, Queen of despair. You keep me together, You drive me insane. The closer you get, The less I can think. Then you look away & my heart starts to sink. You leave & with, You take my breath. Can no longer move, Only grasp empty air. I wish we were more, As you become less and less. I find myself twisted, tangled in this mess. Intoxicated by your very presence, Once again blind. Since you gave me these wings but forbid me to fly. |
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YoungAmbition New Member
since 2008-09-03
Posts 7London Town! UK baby. |
I liked it very much, you've got a lot of skill and the ending line was perfect! I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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XoDenisseoX Junior Member
since 2008-08-09
Posts 14 |
thank you! |
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