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Teen Poetry #8
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XoDenisseoX
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since 2008-08-09
Posts 14
0 posted 2008-09-04 08:28 PM


King of mixed signal, Queen of despair.
You keep me together, You drive me insane.

The closer you get, The less I can think.
Then you look away & my heart starts to sink.

You leave & with, You take my breath.
Can no longer move, Only grasp empty air.

I wish we were more, As you become less and less. I find myself twisted, tangled in this mess.

Intoxicated by your very presence, Once again blind. Since you gave me these wings but forbid me to fly.
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YoungAmbition
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since 2008-09-03
Posts 7
London Town! UK baby.
1 posted 2008-09-05 04:22 AM

I liked it very much, you've got a lot of skill and the ending line was perfect!

I look forward to reading more of your work.
XoDenisseoX
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since 2008-08-09
Posts 14
2 posted 2008-09-07 01:04 PM

thank you!
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