Teen Poetry #8 |
Sugar Sweet, Your Eating My Teeth |
Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
sugar sweet eating my teeth take my breath and let me sleep so you can haunt me in my dreams and keep me together at the seems and i can see it burning bright like a beacon in the night take me away send me along what made you write me after so long |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
You are very, wow. I just wrote someone I hadn't talked to in such a long time. Sometimes I wonder if you are Stephen and you're just messing with my mind. But I liked the poem, very nice. -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
nope haha. im bryan. the infamous CO fo sho. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Good, b/c I have an over active paranoia. Thanks for the reasurance. Hahaha. -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
ROFL!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA HA HA HAHAHAHA I was just going to say how awesome this poem was and how much it made me think but then I read the replies! Oh awesomeness! that just made my day! Be who you are |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
sorry, whats ROFL? |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Hey Gorgeous Boi, OMG GREAT WORK... Love all your work and you know that. Hugs n Kisses Til The Cows Come Home, Jess P.S ROFL= Rolling On Floor Laughing |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Haha.. I like the poem.. I found it interesting.. In a funny type of way.. hehe... Peace on Earth! -Zach |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Great stuff. I really liked it. =] |
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YoungAmbition New Member
since 2008-09-03
Posts 7London Town! UK baby. |
I like the first two stanzas the most and it was a very interesting read =D |
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