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Teen Poetry #8

I Just Need You

thegreatsicknasty
Junior Member

since 2008-08-31

Posts 11

0 posted 2008-09-02 08:25 PM

I want to be there.
I want to be there with you.
Next to you.
I want to lay there with you.
See only you and think only you.

Lay on your chest and listen to you breathing.
Listen to your heart beating the back round.
Beating letting me know the seconds I'm still with you.

I want to feel the scent of you trinkle through my nose and into my mind.
I want to taste you on my lips.
Feel your smooth skin on the edge of my fingers.
Have my hand brush back the hair that masks your face.
I want to see you.
And only you.
Amaze and astound my vision with your smile and your grace.
I want to feel you in my soul.
Feel you breathing.
Feel you move, feel you looking back at me.
I want to hear you talk to me.
Say Anything at all.
Just want to hear you.
Hear you burn through my ears and into my soul.
I just need you.
Near and forever.

YoungAmbition
New Member

since 2008-09-03

Posts 7
London Town! UK baby.

1 posted 2008-09-05 11:47 AM

How on earth has no-one commented on this?!

Very deep and skillfull thought behind it, i wasn't sure if it was a conscious flow kinda poem or one written to verse because the length was a little irregular with each part. But i can actually relate to it and i really really liked it.

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