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Teen Poetry #8

Mythos Story

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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0 posted 2008-08-31 05:38 PM

Mythos Story

I was out on the sea
In a storm to change the minds
Of the counters of our fortune
The greatest of our kind

I never saw the color
Of graves beneath the depths
But I always glanced a wonder
Of what would happen next

So I sit down on the crags
Waiting until the time
When momentum takes me down
In to the swirling foaming brine

But a hand always catches mine
Everytime I swoon
Blessedly recovering me
And none a time too soon

The most of what our world
Is in all its glory
Is in single entity
The sea in mythos story

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2008-09-01 10:26 PM

I never saw the color
Of graves beneath the depths
But I always glanced a wonder
Of what would happen next

amazing. simply awesome.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2008-09-02 04:22 PM

Thanks. I love the sea!

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-09-03 07:22 PM

Brilliant! Loved the metaphor.

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

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