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WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2008-08-28 10:05 PM

You look good,
How have you been?
I’ve been doing all right myself,
Think about you every now and then.
Only when I laugh,
Or when I cry.
When I get up in the morning,
When I go to bed at night.

I can’t believe
It’s really you.
You look so good standing there
That it breaks my heart in two.
The memories
They flood my mind.
I think about the way we used to laugh,
How you used to be mine.

Don’t look like that,
Please don’t feel bad.
I’m never gonna get over you,
And I’m okay with that.
It’s not great,
To tell the truth.
To see you’re with another girl,
And be reminded I don’t have you.

Hey, I’ve gotta go,
‘cause that’s my ride.
But it was really great to see you,
It’s been such a long, long time…
I wish you luck,
I really do.
Just think about me sometimes,
And remember…
I’ll always love you.

Do the day, and let the day do you. - S. King

racer-boy
New Member

since 2008-08-31

Posts 9
united states, tx

1 posted 2008-09-01 07:30 PM

that was a really good right. it some what hit home on the problems im going through right now

live now

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2008-09-01 10:21 PM

deep.very deep. i loved it. the theme of conversation was really neat. very creative. i love it when i find a good one to read, and this was the first one i pulled up. awesome.

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

3 posted 2008-09-03 12:03 PM

I love this- especially the conversational tone of it.

Good job!

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-09-03 02:11 PM

WOW! Beautiful. Simply amazing.

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

XoDenisseoX
Junior Member

since 2008-08-09

Posts 14

5 posted 2008-09-04 08:25 PM

thats really really nice poem =] i love the theme and it sounds alot like what my ex and i are going through but yeah its really cool poem !

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

6 posted 2008-09-05 07:26 PM

Wow...that was amazing. Library for sure.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

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