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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
THis was a challenge, but though I would post the results hear of what I wrote. All the I's in it were sopposed to be. I am a picture being painted and clay molding into a sculpture I wonder the choices I make now , will they make me mature? I hear ringing loud and clear in my ears I see a domed building rising up and out of the horizon I want to be remembered in who I am I am a picture being painted and molded into a sculpture I pretend a act of confidence , and no fear I feel in my heart love reaching out to me here I touch upon memories, sacred gifts to protect I worry if they will know me when I get back I cry at the thought of being strangers to the ones who know me so well I am a picture being painted and molded into a sculpture I understand what it takes to provide pillars for a friendship I say I will always be there for as long as I live I know it in my soul I dream about precious perfect love that will never be I try to get up each morning and only be me I hope for a special person to hold me through the storm. I am a picture being painted and molded into a sculpture |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
I really liked this. I thought a many people (especially teenage girls) could realte to this. GREAT JOB! toodles, Pen |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
~I hope for a special person to hold me through the storm. I am a picture being painted and molded into a sculpture ~ ...very nice Rhia i really liked this poem it kind of described who you are and what you want, etc. etc... very nice hope to read more soon... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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