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Teen Poetry #8

Hypocrisy

Mr. Omniscient
Member

since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

0 posted 2006-12-02 09:43 PM

Your recent deviation has only conjured altercations.
I think your mind is in need of an alleviation
To clear out the messy variation,

I establish declarations,
And you’ll be the source of my declamation.
You’re a follower,
An animation that can’t seem to establish his confrontation.
You think this change to fit the new trend works towards your compensation.
But in your fellow student’s prestige, or estimation,
This only leads to your elimination.

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-12-03 06:33 PM

hipocracy is spelled wrong

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

2 posted 2006-12-03 08:01 PM

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and BELIEVE me... i know what u mean!

great write...i can relate

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

3 posted 2006-12-03 08:01 PM

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and BELIEVE me... i know what u mean!

great write...i can relate

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2006-12-04 12:25 PM

wow, Mr. Omniscient i haven't seen you here for a long time acually i havn't seen you anywhere

nice having you back, i liked this poem yet again your use of words amazes me very nice write...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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