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Teen Poetry #8

Words Will Never Tell

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

0 posted 2008-08-18 09:47 PM

For those who understand what I'm about to say this is an EFY poem.

Words Will Never Tell

Here it is
The battle cry
Ring peace in
Every soul

The tongue tingles
At the Word
Over power us
Mortal men

Can it be
That in a
Moment I
Learned it all again

Can it be
That now I
have again
My dearest friend

So let the
Slothful tongue
Proclaim what I
Now have felt

Not a mortal
Word describes
How my heart
Has melt

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-08-19 09:40 AM

Lovely, I do like this one.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-08-20 12:24 PM

Love this. Great work. Talented Writer.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-08-20 12:25 PM

Thanks guys!

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-08-21 03:56 PM

I like this one Frank.

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

5 posted 2008-08-21 04:47 PM

this is great. i hope i can write something like this one.

~~*K. B.*~~

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

6 posted 2008-08-21 06:13 PM

not my fave from you but still much enjoyed. love the pattern here. short and sweet. haha.

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