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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-07-09 11:13 AM

please don't say it,
i already know.
i've let you down one to many times,
and now you want me to go.

i dont blame you for the way you feel.
if it were me id feel the same.
but just know i did my best,
maybe knowing that will take away some blame.

im not here to say im sorry,
because i dont think im wrong.
we have been fighting the inevitable,
and we have been fighting a little too long.

and now the ties are breaking,
like my broken life.
i hope you know i tried so hard,
i tried with all my might.

the sands are falling faster
in my hourglass of life
im running out of time
trying to make things right,
so keep me close to heart,
as you read my last lines,
just know that i was trying,
but i just ran out of time.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-07-09 12:45 PM

we have been fighting the inevitable,
and we have been fighting a little too long

the sands are falling faster
in my hourglass of life

fabulous. you continue to blow me away.

-Red

If love were a picture that painting would never be finished.

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

2 posted 2007-07-09 01:30 PM

Another masterpiece!! Excellent flow and wording, good job.

I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-07-09 02:16 PM

You always blow me away with your talent

A wonderful poem.

"so keep me close to heart,
as you read my last lines,
just know that i was trying,
but i just ran out of time."

That was my favorite

Keep writing!!

Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding.

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

4 posted 2007-07-09 03:38 PM

amazing, i loved "and now the ties are breaking,
like my broken life." and the last stanza. awesome job

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2007-07-09 06:48 PM

CO you are amazing I loved this... the thought of running out of time so true.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

6 posted 2007-07-09 10:52 PM

"im not here to say im sorry,
because i dont think im wrong.
we have been fighting the inevitable,
and we have been fighting a little too long."
This was my favorite part!
This poem was so amazing..
I wish i could express my emotions as well as you did!

One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag

DeSi - BG
Junior Member

since 2008-08-12

Posts 18
BULGARIA

7 posted 2008-08-13 03:49 AM

Great! I love it....It is really FASCINATING

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

8 posted 2008-08-13 09:54 PM

Amazing, The Orange Strikes Again.. Ur such an inspiring poet...

"So long little angel I'll see you soon"
"We tried really hard to fight this doom"
"Hold tight the memories we made in love"
"Remember the promise of the turtle dove"

"Sing sweet the birds above in the sky"
"For my love for you shall never die"

Luv N Hugs,
Jess

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

9 posted 2008-08-13 10:39 PM

ohh I just love it when poem this brilliant end up back on the front pages again

Krysti

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

10 posted 2008-08-21 06:02 PM

thanks so much you guys.

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