Every Rose has her thornes

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Teen Poetry #8

Every Rose has her thornes

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-08-10 04:36 PM

~*Hey guys! I've been gone for awhile now (computer is getting fixed) And this poem is just words floating in my mind and I wanted to write them down..Frankly I don't like the poem but I like the messeage.. Welp.. Gtg Ttyl!*~

Every castle has a shrew
If you know where to look..
Beauty is everywhere..
You can't learn a lesson quickly from a book..

Everywhere there's a life lesson.
Something to teach and grow
But you have to experience to know what to deal with.
Its not something you come to know.

Its simple yet bitter..
So be careful young child
Oh young pup from the litter
Because life isn't easy; just cruel.

I'll try to help but you need to learn
You gotta work to get what you yearn.
I know by saying this; your getting stubborn by the second..
You'll get mad and will try to ignore..

But one day you'll relize
that I was right all along.
Life isn't easy..
Its complex melody forming a beautiful song.

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2008-08-10 08:04 PM

wow zach. good to finally have you back here!! i know what you mean though, my comp. broke too, but its fixed now, yay!!! anyways...babbling now. great poem, very well written. oh, and have you read Breaking Dawn yet??

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-08-21 03:34 PM

Yeah glad to be back! Yeah I finished Breaking Dawn already.. I drew a picture of Bella and Renesme.. Its my favorite.. so far..

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2008-09-24 02:48 PM

Breaking Dawn is awesome!!!! But Bella is a bit fickle don't ya think? and nice poem.

Love_Skull
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since 2008-07-15

Posts 44

4 posted 2008-10-03 09:20 PM

that was an awesome poem!definitely going in my library!

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