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TESSEBABE
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0 posted 2006-10-28 11:25 AM



ONE WISH

My heart tells me I need you to be here with me forever,
My mind gives me thoughts of you and me once more being together.
I miss the days when you would tell me that you'll always be in love with me,
And all the times you made me laugh to where my eyes were filled with tears and I couldn't see.
I wish I could experience again how it felt to be with someone so strong and so true,
After all this time we've been split I can't believe that I still love you.
If I could have one wish I would wish for another chance to one day be held in your arms,
I would wish to be happy again and kow with God and you in my life I wouldn't be put in any way of evil's harms.
I wish to be you wife,
I wish to be in your love life.
I wish to be your girl,
I wish to be in your love world.
I want to be more than a friend to you,
I want to be your gal and everything else possible to.
I love you so much without a single doubt,
I miss you so much and with, I don't want to take another route.
I care for you deeply with a passion I adore our style,
I want to be the one you wake up to and to witness your early morning smile.
Take me back I promise I won't ruin it again,
I dont want to just talk on the phone with you and be your lonely friend.
Special isn't the word to describe how different you could be,
Unique isn't the word to describe how different you could be.
Let me know you love me and you want to be with me another time,
I wish to be in your heart and never to leave your mind.
I cried and cried because you hurt me so bad when you told me you didn't want to go on with me,
We made a promise to stick together and that our relationship either of us would never leave.
You Craze my appetite then feed my hunger for love,
Delight my pleasure given to you from the hearty one above.
Take my hand and squeeze unitl it decideds to no longer breath,
Grasp my heart and connect it with yours and better love from me you shall recieve.
I wish to be your best love,
I wish to be your last love,
I wish to be your true love,
I wish to be your real love.
Take me back I promise I won't ruin things again,
I don't want to just talk on the phone with you and be your lonely friend.


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rhia_5779
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1 posted 2006-10-28 05:18 PM


wonderufl first post, Very good.

welcome to pip

nick_lyss
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2 posted 2006-10-28 05:48 PM


really good.welcome to piptalk

stargal
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3 posted 2006-10-29 11:01 AM


Welcome to the teen forum of piptalk! It's so nice to see a new face here

Such a lovely and sad poem to read. I thought it was a very good first post and I would like to see more from you.

Thank you for sharing!

"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino            @-->---

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4 posted 2006-10-29 11:31 PM


wow that was a very good first post i can't wait to read more soon... AND WELCOME TO PIP I hope you like it here...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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