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yvetters_24
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since 2006-08-27
Posts 52
california

0 posted 2008-08-06 12:37 PM



let me throw on this fake smile once agian
so we can go out and play pretend
the same way we always do
i'll bury myself beneath the lies
so no one can see thru my disguise
but how long can i readlly hide
i've been like the so long i truly have become towrn in two
both sides battling trying to gain control
the real me is enraged from being enslaved
forced to sit back never able to react to everything you throw in my face
my other half is the one that puts on the act
living a complete lie
never trying to defy
just taking all that u have to say
and now the battle is done
and of course the real me has not won
and for now will lie dormant
awaiting the day my disgues
can no longer handle the lies
and when the day arrives
it will be the end of all our deceptions
when that day comes dont even try to run
imma take all those lies and shove them right back down your throat
anf for once in my life
this story wont end with what you wrote
because i have taken over my life


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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-08-06 11:17 PM


W-O-W! I absolutly LOVE this. I know the feeling though, and I'm sure I'm not the only one. This is a brilliant write and I will be reading more. Library.

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"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Gasken
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since 2008-07-12
Posts 20
Cebu, Philippines
2 posted 2008-08-08 09:41 PM


Great Poem.. Write more poems.. Good job dude.. (--,)
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3 posted 2008-08-11 03:29 AM


amazen poem:d
Krysti

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