Teen Poetry #8 |
The Declining States of America |
I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
A poem i wrote on my way home from indiana, as the economy keeps getting worse, we will all suffer no matter where at in the world. i hope to see this turn the other way but its not looking that way anyways enjoy -------------------------------------------------------------------- “The declining states of America” Once a great country, once a great land Now nothing but crappy and bland Said to be first and nothing could pass Now to fall down and be the very last Fighting war spending money It would be a better life as a bunny Mixing Religion with politics was a mistake Last time that happened people were burned at the stake! The second depression is on its way Dreaming that this will be fixed the very next day Mr. President what should we do? Why ask him he has no clue Still I can see it coming closer to us Before the world ends I’d like to be able to trust Here we come world, we are moving on Maybe somewhere different, always wanted to see those places in that song Everything is falling apart Just as quick as a dart The bad part is when we rot and die Everything will be just fine… P.S. I found this humorous in some parts but thats just me maybe you did to? If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow keagan.. Best poem from you so far.. Its so true and you really got the idea quite right.. Great job! P.S. I did find the bunny bit quite humorous.. haha.. Later days! ~Zach~ "Only in darkness can we see the stars. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
really good man. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
AWESOME JOB KEAGAN PANTS.. LUBS U LONG TIME LIL BRO!! |
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Lady Ayla Member
since 2008-07-19
Posts 84WV, United States |
I found the bunny part humerous, that was really random. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
This is really good. Great write. keep up the awesome poems. ~*Julianna*~ |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Hahaha life as a bunny... {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
yeaa that bunny part was great!!! i thought it was very humorous.. but also evrything else was great in this poem Krysti |
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