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Octave
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since 2008-07-29
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Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2008-08-07 06:27 AM


Losing Battle

As I erase your life,
The map of my heart fades,
All my memories die,
Gone for ever,
But really,
Our lives our are indispensable,
Never to stray out of sight,
Locked in heart forever,
Fingerprints all over this body of mine,
The gallop of my thoughts,
Living on forever more,
Never to be put in the dark
The storm of my dreams
Crashing up your shore
Trickle of wishes
Fine and sweet and pure
Curling, yellowing paper
Of ancient doubts
But memories stay alight
Burning on, glowing light
Hand in hand
Forever more
On grows love
On throughout
There’s the mark you scratched
That still stains my heart
The memento of lost love
Never fading, never shrinking
Never losing love

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. =]

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1 posted 2008-08-11 03:26 AM


There’s the mark you scratched
That still stains my heart


beautiful poem
Krysti

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