Teen Poetry #8 |
Haunted by love |
Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
I am haunted by your touch, Your lips on mine, Your arms around me, As you whisper softly to me. Your words still linger in my ear, What you said before I left, The way you looked at me, I know that you love me. The sweetness of your Embrace, The the heat of your skin, The comfort of your arms, Your touch so soft. I Crave your touch, Your body calls to mine, I long to be with you, For you to see the love in my eyes. I Seek the solace you bring me, Peace I find when I am with you, Feeling's of safety and happiness, your gentle way of love. You are everything I need, You share with me you heart, You give to me your love, I take away your pain. You are my Joy, You bring to me pure happiness, The warmth of your love, The passion of your dreams. Each night away from you I spend, Makes my heart long for yours, The Empty corridors resinate's, Soft foot falls Echo. I dream of your arms, Till I can spend the loving night, Once again by your side, Till mornings sweet kiss. I am haunted by your touch, The memory of your lips, The warmth of your embrace, My name on your lips. I love you, Are the sweet words you said, And the carry me back to your arms, Back to your touch... The touch that haunts my waking moments The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohh Beckie babie!!! I loved this.... Miss you txt me kaii?!?!?! Love you Lots Krysti |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
that was darling, you have no idea what i would give to have a guy say this to me . . . oh wait, i do. but it was beauitful. your words are amazing. i totally loved this and it's deffinatly going in the library. -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
It is true, love is amazaing, and yes most people would give the world to hear him say this. I belive i am lucky. |
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Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
this poem is AMAZING im not lucky with love and u can read that from my poems THE PAIN OF LOVE |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
wow. deep emotion here. i see it and feel it. it takes a great rythm and a great flow to make this happen for me. and you did it nicely. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Wow, thanks, i havent been on in a while, and this is one of my older ones. Becca The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
This poem is soo lovely!!! You are blessed... |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I had to come back and reread this poem! it's just so pretty!!! |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I forgot to add this poem to my library so i had to reply...yet again.. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Wow thank you, thats so nice of you to say, im glad you like my work. Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul. |
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