Teen Poetry #8 |
Home Sweet Home |
Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Different from my usual style. Though not totally sure what my ususal style is. Enjoy. Home Sweet Home One wall black One wall blue Three closed doors I Can't see through Red, red roof Ceiling bare Just one person Not quite there Concrete cold Walls stand strong Road runs past One mile long Lies are scratched Cold steel feelings I look up to My stormy ceiling Walls are canvas Ink to stain Waiting for Undecided pain Anger rattles From wall to wall As weak foundations Take their toll Closed inside A box so bare Out the window Unbroken stare Naked body Lies alone In this place I call home |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
WOW it's amazing and it flowed so nicely! I LOVED IT!!! Live in the present but don't forget the future |
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