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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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0 posted 2008-09-19 10:39 PM


I don't know what's gonna happen
When the memories start to fade?
Will our hearts start to sadden
When our dreams slowly drift away?
I don't know when this will be
Or has it already begun?
Is it too far to see
Or is it near to come?
I don't know what will be tomorrow,
Happiness defeating sorrow
Finally, at last
It might be
If not for the past
The destruction it brings upon me

Has it already begun to rain
Pouring so violently?
Like the tears
That cannot stop
But worse our fears
That make us rot
And slowly too
If only they knew
The World
That sits so blindly
Pertending they can see
Not knowing,
That they're destroying me,
All of us
And why,
Just because

It's what the world does,
Steadily erasing us
What we once were
One detail at a time
Making us unsure
This personality?
This attitude?
Is it mine?
Am I who I am
Why did they take
What I can understand
And leave me with difference
I don't know what's gonna happen
When all I know starts to fade?
Will it even matter
If nothing is the same?


Live in the present but don't forget the future

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GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
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1 posted 2008-09-25 11:27 AM


i like the way you wrote this one...the style fits it
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