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Teen Poetry #8

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-07-21 08:28 PM

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I never knew the world could hold
As much as I’ve received
You have made it all worth while
Given more than I could dream

The sweetness of you kisses
That always grace my cheek
Are better than the sun or moon
And make my knees grow weak

I hear your words and feel them
The sound does not recede
It’s like a sweeping memory
The only air I need

I'm amazed that you can comfort
My swollen angry fire
And make my self grow calmer
My spirit sore much higher

My life has changed, much better
Because you entered in
I’ve grown stronger, wiser
When you became my friend

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Love_Skull
Junior Member

since 2008-07-15

Posts 44

1 posted 2008-07-21 11:07 PM

that was a really good poem, but i didnt really understand the end.after reading it several times i understood it better. great work!

Leah

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2008-07-27 01:13 PM

this is a very good poem.
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2008-07-28 09:07 PM

"My life has changed, much better
Because you entered in
I’ve grown stronger, wiser
When you became my friend"

I loved this!! It's so sweet...nicely written

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

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