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WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2006-10-27 02:32 PM

~OK, this is from a guy's point of view (which i'm kind of experimenting with), so enjoy!~

When she goes cussing through the house,
'Cause she can't find a ringing phone.
Or when she goes dancing down the hallway
'Cause she thinks she's home alone.
When she tells me not to worry,
There'll be no other men.
Or when she flashes me that smile,
I just fall for her again.

Because she's always on my side,
Unless she thinks I'm wrong.
And when life throws her a curve ball,
Well she just says, "Bring it on!"
'Cause she'd rather go down fighting
than give up on any friend.
And when she says, "I love you, babe"
I just fall for her again.

When she wakes up in the morning,
Hit sthe snooze and goes back to bed.
Or when she won't let go of something small,
Because she has the hardest head.
When she does something that's barely moral,
And says rules are made to be bent.
Or when she gives me that secret wink,
I just fall for her again.

Because she's always on my side,
Unless she thinks I'm wrong.
And when life throws her a curve ball,
Well she just says, "Bring it on!"
'cause she'd rather go down fighting
than give up on any friend.
And when she says, "I love you, babe."
I just fall for her again.

When she says some little thing
That makes my whole day right.
Or when she fights with me all afternoon
But holds tight to me all night.

Because she's always on my side,
Unless she thinks I'm wrong.
And when life throws her a curve ball,
Well she just says, "Bring it on!"
'cause she'd rather go down fighting
than give up on any friend.
And when she says, "I love you, babe"
I just fall for her again.

When I stopped trying find the right guy, and concentrated on being the right girl, the right guy found me.

pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

1 posted 2006-10-27 06:06 PM

I really likes this. I thought it was really well done...great write, hope to see more!

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-10-28 12:38 PM

i really liked this (great poem poem from a guys point of view)i thought you handled this very well... it almost sounded like a song i think it would make a cool song but.. that's just my opinion... hope to read more soon...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

3 posted 2006-10-28 06:56 AM

THis was really good. Very smooth write!

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

4 posted 2006-10-30 01:59 PM

yup yup I agree with hunnie I think it would make a good song ..

It has a very good rythem and all flows very smoothly !!

Look forward to readin more..well done!

Belinda~x

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

5 posted 2006-11-01 11:44 AM

woah this was awesome! i loved it!
annd i agree with belinda, i think it would make a pretty cool song too..!

nice=]

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

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