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Teen Poetry #8

Ten Bucks Says

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-07-15 07:39 PM

ten bucks
says you cant
that you dont,
and you wont last
you will break
and i will watch
the clock tick
these seconds away
and i think
your the only thing
thats glued into place

baby i dont see it
could you show me in the light
its dark and i dont know
which way to go

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2008-07-15 10:23 PM

I really liked this! Going in my library.

Cierra

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KandyGrl511
Member

since 2008-11-30

Posts 52
Michigan

2 posted 2008-12-02 07:20 PM

loved it much!?!?!?!

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

3 posted 2008-12-02 07:39 PM

Really great poem

I love pancakes!!!

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

4 posted 2008-12-02 10:31 PM

wow man, this is cool, i'm not a big fan of rap music but if you wrote a couple more verses i swear you could make a rap..... or maybe im just smoking crack.... who knows

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