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Teen Poetry #8

Demons in My Head

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-12-02 06:42 PM

Hey new poem I wrote. Let me know what you think.

Demons in My Head:

There are demons in my head,
The worst place they can be,
I cannot block them out,
As they whisper words to me.

They torture me at night,
And torment me by day,
And since they're in my head,
I cannot run away.

So I unravel from within,
Though nobody can see,
So I cannot be saved,
I never can be free.

These demons scream and shout,
Telling me I'm too blame,
And I slowly fall apart,
As I lose this grueling game.

I wish that I were deaf,
So I could not hear their words,
But I feel a stab of pain,
When each syllable is heard.

There are demons in my head,
And they're tearing me apart,
They're driving me insane,
Whilst piercing my heart.

Their words echo in my mind,
I cannot make them leave,
They will not let me go,
They just won't let me breathe.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-12-02 07:42 PM

WOW, such a great poem!!! I have those demons in my head, too.

I love pancakes!!!

Ri
Member

since 2008-02-01

Posts 67
Blackburn, England

2 posted 2008-12-03 05:35 AM

This is great, fast flowing and love the repetition of the title line. You just need to find angels to scare the demons away

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