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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-07-12 10:16 AM

i know that your too good for me
and i know that im not what you need
but i want you to know

your amazing and your smart
and the only thing
better than your smile
is your heart

im just the stoner kid from down the street
the one that no one wants to meet
and just when i wanted to let it go
you made me believe

im average
through and through
and i dont drive a BMW
but i will care about you
you should know thats the truth

so here i am am with my heart on my sleeve
and i dont know what you could see in me

but give me a sign
just a wink of your eye

and i live for you

[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (07-12-2008 12:28 PM).]

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-07-12 10:34 AM

Oh Bryan, I loved this. It was amazing. It sounds like my boyfriend.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2008-07-12 12:36 PM

"so here i am am with my heart on my sleeve
and i dont know what you could see in me"

This is my favorite line

I love it! It's so sweet, but at the same time it's almost heartbreaking...

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

3 posted 2008-07-13 12:56 PM

"im average
through and through
and i dont drive a bmw"

Lol, that made me laugh. But seriously though, I think that ppl with skills like urs should have no trouble finding someone. Lol, but I've been wrong before!

There is power in the pen.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-07-14 12:01 PM

Bryan this is amazing... I think I'll send this to my girlfriend.. Keep up the writing!

~Zach~

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

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