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BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

0 posted 2008-07-03 06:47 PM

There was a time when I loved you,
A time that I thought you loved me too.
There was a time when I gave you my heart,
And from that day on you’d own a part.

There was a time you left me alone,
So I picked myself up, my heart became stone.
There was a time when you wanted me again,
But it was too late, I was with him.

There was a time I dreamt of what we’d had,
All the good times and the bad.
There was a time I thought we’d be forever,
But those days are foggy and hard to remember.

There was a time I thought you’d be there,
But when I got hurt you weren’t anywhere.
There was a time I thought you’d always be mine,
But that’s gone away just like the time.

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-07-03 08:00 PM

wow!! one of my favs by you.... amazing!
Krysti

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2008-07-08 11:49 PM

Hello! Guess who's back? I've been in a major slump for a few months, but I'm getting better. I read your post the other day. Thanks for your words. ^^

Poetry is art.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

3 posted 2008-07-09 10:14 PM

Stunning, absolutly stunning. That's all I have to say. Oh...and...LIBRARY!!!

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But only you can hear it, hear it..."
-Sara

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2008-07-12 10:59 AM

hahahah it's like you saw my life and wrote it down, freaky.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

5 posted 2008-07-12 12:30 PM

man. the title just drew me in and i wasnt disapointed. amazing.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

6 posted 2008-07-12 12:34 PM

Thanks everyone

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

7 posted 2008-07-14 12:07 PM

I'd have to agree with Clockwork.. Nice title, nice poem! Keep up the writing!

~Zach~

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

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