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0 posted 2008-07-11 04:07 PM




Am I the one who caused you pain?
Should I hide myself in shame?
How can I do this and be so blind?
A friend is a friend and they're hard to find.
How can I live with this burdan and guilt?
Broken down and planned never to be built.
I know I have my flaws and I should'of been there
But I had other things and I should of cared.
I'm too stuck up and to care what others think.
But maybe our problums are somehow linked?
I lost a friend because I wasn't never there.
Don't live how I live. Be there and acctally care.
Don't try to hide what lurks down inside.
Say what you feel; There's no need to hide.
Listen to what they have to say, be gentle and kind.
Trust me nothing is stronger then the bond that keeps you bind.
Learn from my mistakes and be a true friend.
No one wants to see a friendship end...
  
It was my fault and I messed up on a friendship.. so i wrote this...

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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
Canada
1 posted 2008-07-11 07:40 PM


Wow, this is deep, and I mean really deep. Interesting wording, I loved it, and oh so true, for more than just you (didn't mean to ryhm). Hope everything will eventually work out to be somewhat okay.

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But only you can hear it, hear it..."
-Sara

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Space Camp, IN
2 posted 2008-07-12 10:03 AM


i think this is one of you best.
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