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Idiosyncracy (Playdate)

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2008-07-10 02:34 AM

Idiosyncracy (Playdate)

"You are
what you eat,"
they say.

I don't deny it.
'Cause I live on what I eat.
Some holes and Wholesome
[Words]

Intangible bread for my stoned soul.
Yum...

But the soul thirsts...
And listens; and so
the soul waits.

And waits...
And waits
for idiosyncracy to come along.

Playdate!
We play Wii-Play...
And we read
"Alone", by Our Selves.

Idiosyncracy- A peculiar personality trait.
This is my trait; I am
what I say.

7/9/08

eternally_singing
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since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

1 posted 2008-07-11 12:06 PM

hmm... interesting. I liked it!

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

2 posted 2008-07-11 12:14 PM

hmmm.......a weird mixture of technology and poetry....very creative.....good job

If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

3 posted 2008-07-11 12:29 PM

I wonder if my poems are too obscure...

There is power in the pen.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2008-07-11 10:50 AM

They are not too obscure...they just make a person think, and sometimes thats just what someone needs in there day. Great poem, different, but great at the same time.

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But only you can hear it, hear it..."
-Sara

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-07-12 10:45 AM

no i love them they are definitly different but in a really sweet way. i love this too. it was great.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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