Teen Poetry #8 |
Wasting Away (whats not to love) |
Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
just submit just let them win this time its not worth the pain thats written on the signs they say 60 but were on 80 and i think the brakes are broke but were not stoping were hitting this head on traffic cones and warnings are lost inside the song thats playing on the radio and drowning us in feeling because every word is ment for us it almost feels like stealing wrong turns with no road map wasting time at the laundry mats were loving wasting away thats all there is to say |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Awe sad but true.. (Library) ~Zach~ "And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion." |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
Sad, deep, amazing, hurting, wonderful, unique, understandable. Just a few words to describe it. Library. ~*Julianna*~ |
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Idontmindyouundermyskin Junior Member
since 2007-01-29
Posts 32 |
Such a simple and amazing piece kid. Metaphorically it sprouts imagery, which i loved. Keep up the good writes. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
i dont like this poem. ~ you cant run from yourself ~ |
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