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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-07-01 01:50 PM

sitting in the memories we made
im drowning in the ashes
you siad it would be fine but its not
and im sick of falling through
on everything you said

because its cold at 2 AM
when your aching for a friend
its like every light in Paris
has burned out
sitting on the street curb
with your taste still in my mouth
i am burnt out

im tired and alone
and sick of being cold
confined to this empty room
your tempted soul is sold
i wish the story didnt end this way
i wish it with all my heart
but i cant take back time
and i know we cant re-start

but its cold at 2 AM
when your aching for a friend
its like every light in Paris
has burned out
sitting on the street curb
with your taste still in my mouth
i am burnt out

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-07-01 06:30 PM

Awe this poem had strangely a bitter, sweet end.. but i know how you feel.. .... hope you get better and find another friend.

~Zach~

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2008-07-01 08:42 PM

"i wish the story didnt end this way
i wish it with all my heart
but i cant take back time
and i know we cant re-start"

Wow this left me speachless...as usual nice work clockwork

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2008-07-01 11:33 PM

Amazing as per usual..
Watch out for my sequal... So easy to write a sequal to any of your work as its always so amazing..

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

4 posted 2008-07-10 02:22 AM

Man, I loved this piece! It's something everyone can relate to.

There is power in the pen.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

5 posted 2008-07-10 10:49 AM

This is strangly intreaging. It's words speak out off the screan and make you think, great job! Library.

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But only you can hear it, hear it..."
-Sara

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

6 posted 2008-07-11 12:04 PM

amazing. ~library

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

7 posted 2008-07-12 10:48 AM

i can't even commend you the way you should be- english doesn't have the words for it. suffice it to say you render me speachless.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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