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Teen Poetry #8

Too many Sheep

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2008-07-09 12:21 PM

Too many Sheep

Sheep are born.
They graze.
They multiply.
They sleep.
And they passed on.

The End...

A wolf?
The circle breaks.

"There's too many of you!"
"There's not enough land."

So the wolf attacks
and loses.

There are too many sheep.
Six billion too many.

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2008-07-09 09:09 PM

Wow, that's a twist there. But it is true...there's a hidden meaning here isn't there?

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-07-09 09:58 PM

A very different write. But so true. I can see that hidden meaning, keep up the work.

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But only you can hear it, hear it..."
-Sara

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

3 posted 2008-07-10 01:58 AM

Yeah, there's definitely more below the surface. I was thinking about the war in Iraq and how we've used up so many resources.

There is power in the pen.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2008-07-10 04:39 AM

hmmm.. sheep

lol I wish I could be a sheep

Krysti

psss... good too see you back

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