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Teen Poetry #8

Two lives

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-07-10 05:18 PM

~This doesn't tell much of the story, but im still not sure how to write it.

One party
One invatation
Two lives
Three broken hearts
One who cares
Three who don't,
equals a living hell.

Five thousand tears
even more cries
Three get what they want
But there is still one
She matters the most
to one I suppose
It's Power against will.

Three months
One hundred cuts
never ending pain
It's power against a wish
One girl
Five million prayers
Saved
Two
Lives

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

1 posted 2008-07-10 06:34 PM

Is this about the same person in "Broken but healing"?

I liked how you put your thoughts into very few words. I think I got most of the story, but some parts were a bit hazy.
But I won't pester you for the story.

Privacy comes first.
Other than that, nice job!

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-07-10 07:43 PM

Yes to answer your question it is about the same person. I still know I can do better but I haven't really had time to think about it all. Thanks for reading, it's always appreciated.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

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