Falling out of love (a submission to a poetry challenege)

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Falling out of love (a submission to a poetry challenege)

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-07-08 11:48 AM

How could she said those things?
Its easy to hurt a heart.
Could I be falling out of love?
Did that beer have a part?

She said she loved me
But used me for her own game.
Just to empress her friends.
Feeling degrated and in shame..

How did I believe the lies?
Held above all the truth..
It happened at the carnival,
right at the kissing booth.

A harmless kiss.
Progress in what is more.
I should of known better.
Was I used in this game? What was she trying to use me for?

Could this be the symptoms?
Of falling out of love?
To feel so degrating..
Feels pretty familiar.. fits like a glove.

I'm done with that girl now.
But I'm hurting down inside.
But I'll keep on smileing.
Just so I can hide.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2008-07-08 01:32 PM

Wow, this poem speaks alot. Great write and so true, even for me...

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But you can hear it, hear it
Wherever you m

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-07-09 01:25 PM

Well I read both of them and honestly I like this one better. They're both great writes though.

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-07-10 04:37 AM

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