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Teen Poetry #8

My Hero

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-07-01 06:45 PM

Ok, not my best probably one of my worst. It's really cheesy and corny.

My Hero:

You're not strong like Hercules,
And you're no Orlando Bloom,
You don't talk at all like Romeo,
But you make my heart go boom.

You don't sing like an angel,
Or dance like Fred Astair,
You're hardly David Beckham,
But I don't really care.

You don't wear shining armor,
And you do not have a sword,
You didn't ride in to save me,
Upon a large white horse.

You may not be Prince Charming,
But I'm no Cinderella,
But you are still my hero,
And no-one could be better.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-07-01 07:04 PM

Lol I still love cheesy, corny poems lol. Good job!

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-07-02 12:08 PM

Love it, great job.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2008-07-02 02:29 AM

Love it...

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

4 posted 2008-07-02 11:34 AM

realy good job, keep that way

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