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Teen Poetry #8

Your Immortal Kiss.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-07-01 07:24 PM

The wind rushes through your hair.
Face during red
When I'm with you I feel bare.
You make me feel alive once again..

Forever hanging in the moment
Living off your cool breathe.
Captured in your imprace.
Nothing to seperate us, not even death

For I'll always live back in the memories of old.
Can't wake from this dream.
Lips barely touching, making my blood run cold.
My heart once was locked up with key.

But now my heart will fly once again.
Open and free.
Tears roll down my face.
Your beauty taking over me.

Stunn by your smile.
Living off just your presence.
My hand's always shaking.
My mind goes blank, losing all sence of my control.

For I'll always live in your enternal kiss...
~Tribute to my girlfriend, Kelsey.. Love ya bunches!!~

~Zach~

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2008-07-01 09:00 PM

Aw this is so sweet!!! I hope u plan on giving it to her because im sure she would love it!!!!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-07-02 12:17 PM

Awe! This is awesome. And i agree, u should give it to her.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

3 posted 2008-07-02 12:15 PM

i am loving it. omg its like amazing. seriously what a great write. its library worthy for sure.

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