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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 2008-07-01 12:19 PM



So many questions racing through our minds,
But for some odd reason we can't find the time.
We can't find the answers because they don't
exsist, we don't look harder because they can't be missed.
This is the poem for the ones who have given up, this ones for you 'cause I know you're stil up.

You can't sleep because your mind is racing,
you're so tied up in what direction your life is facing.
We all know this feeling 'cause it happens to everyone, people give up;
you're not the only one. When you feel so hopeless read this again, remind yourself what will happen if that friendship ends.
The world will go on spinning but they'll be caught in a tide, it wasn't your fault even though you're hurting on the inside.
Their problem wasn't yours but you'll help anyway, because you care for them and you will always.

Giving up is easy but letting go is hard,
don't let one of these problems shatter your heart. The world will go on spinning,
the flowers will still bloom.
Remember what I told you that one night in June. You can't let go entierly when you care enough to see, there will always be questions and not always answers from me.
Nobody knows everything so how can they understand?Well let me tell you that they can still hold your hand.
As long a you listen you'll find what you need, just grab hold of someone and let them lead.

{~~*~~}


"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

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BrittanyJ
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1 posted 2008-07-01 12:37 PM


Wow, i really like this. I kinda felt like you were talking to me cause i am up late just beacuse i'm upset lol thanks for posting it

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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2 posted 2008-07-01 05:51 AM


Emmi.. This is amazing.. love your work..

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3 posted 2008-07-01 07:42 AM


Thank you Emily... thank you so much...this is so going to my library... And i will read everytme im down.. once again thanks..  

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

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4 posted 2008-07-01 07:42 AM


Thank you Emily... thank you so much...this is so going to my library... And i will read everytme im down.. once again thanks..  

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

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5 posted 2008-07-01 10:11 AM


wonderful work was very nice to read

i'm lost and going nowhere

XxForever.BrokenxX
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6 posted 2008-07-02 12:06 PM


You're Welcome Zach. And thanks for reading.

              {~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

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