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Teen Poetry #8

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Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

0 posted 2008-07-01 12:53 PM

The phone rings
its him

talking for hours
about everything
or anything

trust is for it all
a shoulder for cring
hands for truth

he dosent lie
he says it all right
hes there every night

seeming to mean nothing

waiting
wanting to see something
some change
something

The phone rings
its him

talking for hours
about everything
and anything

Missing you
missing him

now he means something
calling late
just to say
goodnight
sleep tight
sweet dreams

the phone rings
its him

talking for hours
about it all
he means everything

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-07-01 05:51 AM

Love it.. Excellent write.. very talented..

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-07-01 07:31 AM

I agree with Jess... This is an great poem and you are a talented writer

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2008-07-01 10:12 AM

makes me think how hard ldr's really are. purdy poem.

i'm lost and going nowhere

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

4 posted 2008-07-01 10:33 AM

thank you all very much!

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