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broken_imperfection
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since 2008-06-27

Posts 15
WV, USA

0 posted 2008-06-29 09:59 PM

Always There..

When I become
weak and fall..
You never left my side
through the pain and all..

Always There..

To bring that smile
to my pale face..
Come forth to
steady my life in a pace..

Always There..

To show me whats
right and whats wrong..
To help me stand
to make me strong..

Always There..

To show me I'm not alone
and that some one loves me..
To help me wipe my tears
so I can always see..

Always There..

When I become weak
and make my mistakes..
For I know the prices
the chances I must take..
Your Always There
to do what you do..
And I will give anything
to keep loving you...

"Don't hit your kids. No, seriously, they have guns now."

© Copyright 2008 Jenny Adkins - All Rights Reserved

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-06-30 03:59 PM

woah i dont lknow why you havent got any other replies this was amazing Jenny..

Krysti

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2008-07-01 12:45 PM

Wow i agree with Hunnie...this is amazing.
I am shocked that u haven't gotten more...I love it

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-07-01 07:29 AM

Awee this is a erally sweet poem.. Reminds me of my girlfriend... Great write!

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2008-07-01 10:14 AM

very very good lots of emmotion in this one i loved it

i'm lost and going nowhere

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

5 posted 2008-07-01 11:13 AM

great write very emotionally packed. and seems very true to the heart. love it.
keep up the great work.

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