Teen Poetry #8 |
To see you cry |
broken_imperfection Junior Member
since 2008-06-27
Posts 15WV, USA |
I can't stand to know you cry.. Even worse I hate not knowing why.. I hate to know I can't wipe them away.. But still I stand here sad yet another day... I want to be able to wipe away your tears.. I want to be able to kiss away all your fears... But I'm still here alone in this place of my own.. The tears in my eyes countless times have shown.. I don't want you to cry I don't want you to tear... I want you to live your life with happiness and no fears... Your tears kill me inside and I can't stand this pain.. It's making me go crazy I'm reaching insane... "Don't hit your kids. No, seriously, they have guns now." |
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Ri Member
since 2008-02-01
Posts 67Blackburn, England |
I really like this, and can totally relate to this It's really hurting me at the moment, because I see people sad and end up blaming myself for not being able to cheer them up |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I know exacally how you feel. Fantastic poem. You're a great writer. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
**~~thiz iz sumthin i can totally relate too! It's how I feel now about my best friend who is STATES away! THANKS great write!!~~** Adreanna <33 |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I can relate to this to. Too. You have a real gift for flow. Exellent. VICTORY TO THE MOLE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
i liked this alot. i think it might make my library, which i never add to. haha. anyways, i loved it, good work. |
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