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Teen Poetry #8

Im In Too Deep

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-06-29 06:46 PM

sitting in an empty room
the silence consumes
pulsating inside me
like a memorie of forgoten doom

with a low hung head
and eyes half asleep
i pray to the skys
that im not in too deep...

but i already know the answer
im in over my head
drowning in the sickning fear
that makes you wish for death

im in too deep
and im sinking fast
wishing to be someone else
with someone elses past

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-06-29 08:05 PM

This is my favorite poem of yours at the moment lol. its really good and exactly how i feel at the moment.. great work!

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

2 posted 2008-06-30 11:43 AM

Wow, this is great. = ] Once again, a masterpiece. You've got such a way with the English language!!

Do the day, and let the day do you. - S. King

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2008-06-30 02:03 PM

"im in too deep
and im sinking fast
wishing to be someone else
with someone elses past"

My favorite lines

A wonderful write

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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