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Abiola Junior Member
since 2006-08-09
Posts 29 |
The desire of hope is what we anticipate To see the trust that we crave and long for Hope is kind and certain And will never disown you as long as you have faith. Your willing to believe will always tick the feeling in your heart as hope… Hope will never fade away unless you let it……. Hope is essential and will never let you down Hope will never tell you to move backward but to always move forward and reach for the stars……… Hope is what we want but can we receive it? You decide…….. Your desire is anything you want it to be You may let hope pass u by in a heart beat or take advantage of it…….. Hope is what I love Because it will never let me down Hope is all I have and need…….. Because I’m Abiola and I live off of hope!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now that's a positively hopeful outlook! Keep your dreams alive. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
u , good not using internet speak except for that one. Maybe try to use other words for hope. Nice to see you writing other types of poetry, and exploring it. One of your better writes. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
"The desire of hope is what we anticipate To see the trust that we crave and long for Hope is kind and certain And will never disown you as long as you have faith." I enjoyed reading this part; it is a very beautiful picture of hope. I think you did an excellent job of description in this stanza. Also, like rhia said, I think this is one of your better poems. Thanks for not using a whole lot of the chat lingo. I know that it is easier/faster to write with but it is slightly annoying to read in poetry form. Thanks for sharing this piece!  "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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